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    Talking The most interesting thing is...

    Hi, I'm not sure which of the following sentences is correct, please help!


    1. When I went to a train station for the first time, the most interesting thing was lots of people running with their heavy luggage.

    2. When I went to a train station for the first time, the most interesting thing was that lots of people were running with their heavy luggage.

    Which one is correct?
    Or are they both not a good way to express? How can I write it more naturally?

    Thanks!!

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    Re: The most interesting thing is...

    They are run-on sentences, so you need to change the commas to full-stops.
    You need "were" after "people".
    I am not a teacher.

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    #3

    Re: The most interesting thing is...

    They are not run-on sentences, Ted. Perhaps you missed the word when that begins both of them. Replacing the commas as you suggest would make them sentence fragments.

    They are both correct as written. I prefer the second.
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