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    Please correct my mistakes

    Hello guys!I need to write an e-mail to a university asking the entry requirements for international students. I'd really appreciate if you could correct my mistakes so as to be a formal email. This is the e-mail:

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    My name is ------, i am a college student in ---------- University of -------- in ------ and i am interested in continue my education with your University. I was wondering if i can transfer to your university before i complete the 4 years here in -------. I was wondering also if this is possible that any of my credits from ------ would be recognized towards the complition of my degree or i have to study from the beggining. Furthermore i am looking for post graduate in your university, regardless of the acceptance of the formation transfer and possibly my doctora! I study public administration , and i am in the 3rd year of my studies. Additionaly this winter semester i am attending lessons at university of maribor in Slovenia as an erasmus student.


    Last as about the foundation, I will apply to ---

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    #2

    Re: Please correct my mistakes

    Quote Originally Posted by Gsta View Post
    Hello, guys!

    I need to write an e-mail to a university asking for the entry requirements for international students. I'd really appreciate it if you could correct my mistakes so as to be make it a formal email. This is the e-mail:

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    My name is ------ I am a college student in ---------- University of -------- in ------, and I am interested in continuing my education with at your University. I was wondering I wish to know if I can transfer to your university before I complete the 4 years here in -------. I was wondering also if this is possible that any of my credits from ------ would be recognized towards the complition of my degree by your university, or if I would have to study start from the beginning.
    Quote Originally Posted by Gsta View Post
    Furthermore, I am looking for an appropriate postgraduate course in your university, regardless of the acceptance of the formation wheher I can transfer. and possibly my doctora! I am studying public administration, and I am in the 3rd year of my studies. Additionally, this winter semester I am attending lessons at the University of Maribor in Slovenia as an erasmus student.
    I don't see why you're looking for a postgraduate course at this stage.

    Quote Originally Posted by Gsta View Post
    Last as about the foundation, I will apply to ---
    I don't understand this part at all.

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    #3

    Re: Please correct my mistakes

    Hello, which country do you plan on studying in?

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    Last edited by teechar; 30-Dec-2016 at 12:05. Reason: added "not a teacher"

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    Re: Please correct my mistakes

    I am a student at [university name]

    postgraduate course at your university
    Translator, editor and TESOL certificate holder, but not a teacher. Native speaker of American English (West Coast)

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