I derive satisfaction from ...

[Odessa Dawn]

[name]
● Email: ...
● M: …
● Address: ...

Personal Profile

I derive satisfaction from understanding troubling questions (of/about?) human life and help shape their lives for the best to make this world a better place. My goal is to continue carrying out the clinical psychology research to develop theories in this field and discover new facts to apply them to real-world situations.

Skills
- highly self-motivated
- (epistemophile/scholar/Philomath?)
- curious learner
- enjoying a challenge and thrive under pressure
Communication
- having the ability to manage and respond to an emotional experience
- empathetic
- receptive
- having an ability to see things from other people's perspective
- developing my skills to deal with difficult people
Computer Applications
- IT Proficient in Microsoft Excel, Word, and PowerPoint
Languages
- Arabic - English
Awards
I was the top-ranking student in master's degree.
I came top in bachelor's degree.
I won the King … Annual Research Competition, in fourth place on university, and in first place on College of Sciences and Arts
Employment History
2000 To Date
I have been teaching undergraduates at … University.
Community Services
- presenting materials for personal development for teenagers
- volunteered with a non-profit organization called INSAN helps Syrian refugees who suffer from PTSD
Education/Degrees
… - June 2014
a master's in counseling psychology
… - 2008
a bachelor's in psychology
Workshops and Courses Attended
…
Conference Attended
04/2016
… conference name
References
Dr. …
… University - department of psychology
Head of psychology department - the girls section
Assistant Professor
Mobile: …
Email: …
Dr. …
… University - department of psychology
Assistant Lecturer
Mobile: …
Email: …
Dr. …
… University - department of psychology
Assistant Lecturer
Mobile: …
Email: …





Is that CV correctly written? Any suggestion?

[Odessa Dawn]

That post hasn't yet attract your attention. I understand that that post is long. I am going to cut it into chunks.

[teechar]

[name]
● Email: ...
● Mobile: …
● Address: ...

Personal Profile

I derive satisfaction from understanding troubling questions (of/about?) human life and help shape their lives for the best to make this world a better place. My goal is to continue carrying out the conducting research into clinical psychology research to develop theories in this field and discover new facts to apply them to real-world situations.

Skills
- highly self-motivated
- (epistemophile/scholar/Philomath? avid learner)
- curious learner
- enjoy ing a challenge and thrive under pressure
Communication
- having the ability to manage and respond to an emotional situation experience
- empathetic
- receptive
- having an ability to can see things from other people's perspective
- developing my skills to can deal patiently with difficult people

Computer Applications
- IT proficient in Microsoft Excel, Word, and PowerPoint
Languages
- Arabic, native
- English, proficient

Awards
I was the top-ranking highest-ranked student in master's degree.
I came top in bachelor's degree.
I won the King … Annual Research Competition: in fourth place on in university, and in first place on in College of Sciences and Arts

Employment History
2000 To Date
I have been teaching undergraduates at … University.

Community Services
- presenting materials for personal development for teenagers
- volunteered with a non-profit organization called INSAN helps Syrian refugees who suffer from PTSD

Education/Degrees
… - June 2014
a master's in counseling psychology
… - 2008
a bachelor's in psychology
Workshops and Courses Attended
…
Conference Attended
04/2016
… conference name
References
Dr. …
… University - department of psychology
Head of psychology department - the girls section
Assistant Professor
Mobile: …
Email: …
Dr. …
… University - department of psychology
Assistant Lecturer
Mobile: …
Email: …
Dr. …
… University - department of psychology
Assistant Lecturer
Mobile: …
Email: …

I could not understand the text highlighted in blue. I also strongly suggest that you cut out the waffle, and add actual substance to that CV, especially under Employment History and even Education/Degrees.

[Odessa Dawn]

… understanding troubling questions (of/about?) human life

I wanted to say this:

I am interested in the source of difficulty that disturbs people's minds.


and help shape their lives for the best to make this world a better place

I added more information to make myself clearer:

To fully understand anxiety disorder, emotional regulation, positive psychology, and personal development so that I can help people live a better, happy life.

… discover new facts to apply them to real-world situations

To learn from recent/previous studies conducted in the field that can be applied to real world situations

[Odessa Dawn]

I also strongly suggest that you cut out the waffle, and add actual substance to that CV, especially under Employment History and even Education/Degrees.

I don't know how to go about that. Any help?

[teechar]

I don't know how to go about that. Any help?

The content of post #4 is mostly waffle or, at least, generic material that applies to any psychologist's profile.

By "substance" I meant concrete details (dates, numbers, etc.)

[bubbha]

I would recommend putting the Education section first and the Employment History section second.