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  1. Nikitus's Avatar
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    #1

    I'm glad I could give you a birthday present.

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "I'm glad I could give you a birthday present. It makes me happy to remember that day and the time when you came to my birthday party and how sweet you were to me. I remember your present. It was box of chocolate sticks wrapped in a light brown paper and yellow bow."

    Thanks,

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    #2

    Re: I'm glad I could give you a birthday present.

    For the second sentence try:

    It makes me happy to remember the day you came to my birthday party and how sweet you were to me.
    Last edited by Tarheel; 27-Dec-2016 at 17:11.

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    #3

    Re: I'm glad I could give you a birthday present.

    For the fourth sentence try:

    It was a bunch of chocolate sticks in a yellow box. They were individually wrapped in light brown paper.

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    #4

    Re: I'm glad I could give you a birthday present.

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    I'm glad I could give you a birthday present. It makes me happy to remember that day and the time when you came to my birthday party and how sweet you were to me. I remember your present. It was a box of chocolate sticks wrapped in light brown paper and tied with a yellow bow.
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