[Grammar] I love to travel with my friends, especially to meet new people,

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Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"I love to travel with my friends, especially to meet new people, learn the local history and relax. I love to have deep conversations with my mother, family and my friends to learn of different points of view. What was your dream job as a child?"
 

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I would probably put a comma after "history" and "my" before "family".
 

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You could just use "my relatives" instead of "my mother, my family".

There doesn't seem to be much connection between your three sentences. The first two have a bit of a connection, I suppose, but the third really doesn't fit with the other two.
 

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Dear Tarheel and emsr2d2:

Thanks for your help.

The sentences are related to the questions about: Name two things related to what do you love to do? and after finish answering the answers the person asks: What was your dream job as a child? changing the subject of the conversation.

Best Regards.
 

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Where did you find that exercise?
 

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Dear Tarheel and emsr2d2:

Thanks for your help.

The sentences are related to the questions about: Name two things related to what do you love to do? and after YOU finish answering the QUESTIONS the person asks: What was your dream job as a child? changing the subject of the conversation.

Best Regards.

Hm.
 

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Perhaps:

I love to have to have deep conversations with my family and friends to learn about different points of view.
 
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