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    Having a ring resized

    Assume I went yesterday for buy a ring. Then I selected a ring and ask them to resize. Then they promised me to give that ring on 30th of December.
    Let’s assume I want to telephone to that shop and ask possibility to collect that ring on 23rd of January.

    Therefore if I ask that as following sentence is it correct?

    Hello, I am calling you regarding order number 8888, I gave a new ring for resize, as that invoice Today is the delivery date. So If I come on 23rd of January is it possible to collect it?
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 30-Dec-2016 at 08:31. Reason: Changed unnecessary red, bold sentence to plain text

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    Re: Is this sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by dondon525 View Post
    Assume I went yesterday for to buy a ring yesterday. Then I selected a ring and ask them to resize it. Then They promised me to give that ring that it would be ready on the 30th of December.
    Let’s assume I want to telephone to that the shop and ask about the possibility to of collecting that the ring on the 23rd of January.

    Therefore if I ask that as Is the following sentence is it correct?

    Hello, I am calling you regarding order number 8888. I gave you a new ring for to be resized, as that and the invoice shows today is as the delivery date. So If I come on 23rd of January is it possible to collect it? Can I collect it on January 23rd?
    See my suggested changes above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Having a ring resized

    dondon,please note that I have changed your thread title.

    Extract from the Posting Guidelines:

    'Thread titles should include all or part of the word/phrase being discussed.'

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