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    Red face My personal biography

    I'm learning to write, can you correct my biography?
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    Hi everyone! My name is XXX. I was born 25 September 19XX in Bergamo, a city next Milan. We are famous in the world for the Venetian walls, upper city. These are very beautiful and you can see that simply thanks to Ryanair. Yesterday i wanted to subscribe to UsingEnglish.com site, because i'm interested to learn English very well, i can and i want. I always learned to school english but i never had possibility to talk with others and you know if you don't practice and exercise, english bye bye. Now i need to talk it for my job and my personal interesting. I would like to see English films, podcast and read english technical articles on the web. That's all and I hope to learn english finally to my personal satisfaction.
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 05-Jan-2017 at 17:30. Reason: Hiding some personal details.

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    #2

    Re: My personal biography

    Quote Originally Posted by Gallo87 View Post
    I'm learning to write. Can you correct my biography?
    Thanks so much!

    Hi everyone! My name is XXX. I was born 25 September 19XX in Bergamo, a city next Milan. We are famous in the world for the Venetian walls of the upper city. These are very beautiful, and
    you can see that simply thanks to Ryanair. Yesterday, I wanted decided to subscribe to UsingEnglish.com site, because I'm interested in to learning English very well, and I believe I will succeed in learning it. i can and i want. I always learned to studied English at school, english but I never had the opportunity possibility to talk converse in English with others, and you know if you don't practice and do exercises, you're likely to forget what you learn. english bye bye. Now, I need to speak talk it for my job and my out of personal interest. ing. I would like to see be able to follow what they say in English films, podcasts and to read English technical articles on the web. That's all, and I hope to learn English, finally, to for my personal satisfaction.
    Hello Gallo87, and welcome to the forum.

    I don't understand the reason for mentioning Ryanair in your text.

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    Re: My personal biography

    Did you mean that you can see the Venetian walls for yourself simply by taking a flight to Milan/Bergamo with Ryanair? I'm sure there are other airlines serving the area.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: My personal biography

    Your 'personal biography' is your autobiography.

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    #5

    Re: My personal biography

    yes, i wanted to say just like that. I think that only Ryanair, perhaps Wizz Air too.

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    #6

    Re: My personal biography

    Quote Originally Posted by Gallo87 View Post
    Yes, I wanted to say it just like that. I think that only Ryanair, perhaps Wizz Air too, fly there.
    Unless you feel the need to advertise those airlines, just say "They are very beautiful and you can see them for yourself with a cheap flight".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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