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    What is the score of the uploaded essay

    Should 18 year olds learn to drive a car or it is better to learn it after 25?


    Undoubtedly, people from all walks of life should learn to drive a car, nowadays. Some people argue that 18 year olds should learn driving a car and others perception is that it is more appropriate to do it in 25 years of age.
    According latest research done by the experts of Cambridge University, not only 18 year individuals are more capable of mastering driving a car, but it is beneficial to them in very many ways. For instance, after the age of 18 most of the individuals attend universities, start their working life or marry and these are where the capability of learning driving comes in. It might be required they go for shopping, and more importantly they go on trips to have a lot of fun, particularly in the period ( between 18 and 27) that they are thoroughly energetic.
    Having looked at the above issue from different angles and dimensions, one turns to the question what are the disadvantages of being eligible to drive a car in 25 years of age? My assumption would be that individuals hectic lives might not let them to learn driving any more. Moreover, in the age of 25 individuals could learn lower than youngers.
    What it all comes down to is that 18 year olds should be eligible to master driving. Although at the first glance it seems inappropriate, authorities involved should pave the way they learn driving.


    "it was the topic of today's IELTS exam, general module "

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    Re: What is the score of the uploaded essay

    Is this the essay you submitted today, in your IELTS exam?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: What is the score of the uploaded essay

    I would say it's around a 5.

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