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    Experience unique learning platform powered by powerful computing

    Hi All ,

    Writing this sentence for a banner of website . Could you please suggest if this sentence can be improved to convey the concept in more meaningful and attractive way ( the website is for student , which help in the exam preparation):

    "Experience unique learning platform powered by powerful computing, filters the randomness and chaos of big syllabus, and help you align to the right direction.Experience unique learning platform powered by powerful computing, filters the randomness and chaos of big syllabus, and help you align to the right direction"

    Thanks for your input !

    Pankaj

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    Re: Experience unique learning platform powered by powerful computing

    Welcome to the forum.

    Is the banner really going to contain the sentence twice?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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