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  1. Donbelid's Avatar
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    #1

    Normal type of listing items

    Hello everyone,
    I want to propose a number of topics to be put on agenda for a meeting. I wonder which type of writing seems normal to a native speaker:

    Type1:
    - How to create and access an updated record of…
    - How to hold joint professional workshops.
    - How can we actively use… (or how to use actively…)

    Type2:
    - Creation of and access to an updated record of…
    - Organization of joint professional workshops.
    - Use of…

    Type3:
    - Creating and accessing to an updated record of…
    - Holding joint professional workshops.
    - Actively using…
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 10-Jan-2017 at 14:37.

  2. emsr2d2's Avatar
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    #2

    Re: Normal type of listing items

    I'd use 2 or 3. I don't really have a preference between those two. 1 is unnecessarily wordy.

    Note that in 3, you need to remove "to" after "accessing".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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