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    #1

    Peter mused on the events

    I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    Peter mused on the events that led to him losing his job, going through a divorce and then becoming an alcoholic.

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    #2

    Re: Peter mused on the events

    It needs a comma after divorce. You could lose then without changing the meaning.
    I am not a teacher.

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