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THE ANOMALY OF ENTERTAINMENT INDUSTRY IN AMERICA:
HOLLYWOOD MOVIE IN ECONOMIC CRISIS 2008


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Hollywood movie is one of the main industry in America, particularly in entertainment industry. Hollywood had also giving influence to movie industry in many countries. The influence that Hollywood gave in movie industry as known as Hollywodization. Hollywood becoming the one of income sources to US. Economic crisis was happened in 2008. The crisis gave impact to a whole life industry, included movie industry. Economic crisis in 2008 became a parameter how far hollywood movie industry could be existed in the bad situation. Even though US was recess in that time, hollywood movie industry still working as usual. Based on this explanation, this study will be focus on the growth of hollywood move industry in economic crisis 2008.
 

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The Anomaly of the Entertainment Industry in America--
Hollywood Movies in the 2008 Economic Crisis.

[STRIKE]THE ANOMALY OF ENTERTAINMENT INDUSTRY IN AMERICA:
HOLLYWOOD MOVIE IN ECONOMIC CRISIS 2008


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The Hollywood movie/entertainment industry is one of the main [STRIKE]industry[/STRIKE] industries in America. [STRIKE], particularly in entertainment industry.[/STRIKE] Hollywood [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] has also [STRIKE]giving[/STRIKE] had much influence [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] on the movie industries in many other countries. [STRIKE]The influence that Hollywood gave in movie industry as known as[/STRIKE] A special term "Hollywodization" has even been coined to describe the influence Hollywood has had on other cultures. Hollywood has become [STRIKE]ing the one[/STRIKE] an important source of income [STRIKE]sources[/STRIKE] to the US. When the economic crisis of 2008 occurred, [STRIKE]was happened in 2008. The crisis gave impact to a whole life industry,[/STRIKE] it impacted a wide range of industries, including the [STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE] movie industry. Economic crisis in 2008 became a parameter how far hollywood movie industry could be existed in the bad situation. Even though the US was in a recession [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at that time, it continued to be business as usual for the Hollywood movie industry. [STRIKE]still working as usual. Based on this explanation,[/STRIKE] This study will [STRIKE]be[/STRIKE] focus on the growth of the Hollywood movie industry [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] during the economic crisis of 2008.

I don't understand the text highlighted in blue.
Also, your text looks more like an introduction/summary than an abstract.
 

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The economic crisis of 2008 was a test of the resilience of Hollywood movie industry to weather the bad times?
 

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Dilahap, in future posts, please remember to ask us an actual question. Also, please tell us the purpose of your pieces of writing.
 
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