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[kasvan]

Hi,
i am not sure about those two sentences whether they are grammatically correct.

I have learnt that the financial system can uplift or cripple whole economies, because we are all influenced by money and its power. Hence, understanding of finance and consequently money in business and politics gives you the ability to understand how the world works.

 

[Rover_KE]

Welcome to the forum, kasvan.

Did you write these sentences yourself?

 

[kasvan]

Thanks! Yes, I did.

 

[tedmc]

Hi,
i am not sure about those two sentences whether they are grammatically correct.

I have learnt that [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] financial systems can uplift or cripple whole economies, because we are all influenced by money and its power. Hence, the understanding of finance and consequently money in business and politics gives you the ability to understand how the world works.

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[emsr2d2]

Hi,
I am not sure [STRIKE]about[/STRIKE] whether these two sentences [STRIKE]whether they[/STRIKE] are grammatically correct.

See above.