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    Do you like walk?
    Do you like to walk on your own or with others?
    Would you say that your city is a good place for walking?

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    I do like walk with others, especially with my girlfriend. My girlfriend is 20, her name is Anna. Anna and I live in RRR, in RRR there are many walking streets, the landscape is beautiful, the atmosphere is clean. On walking streets there are many kids are flying kites, or playing with their parents. So RRR is a good place for walking.
    About us, we usually walk in the everyday morning, while walking we often talk about each other to learn from each other.

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    #2

    Re: Walking

    QuanLe
    What is the question that you want to ask?
    I am not a teacher.

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    #3

    Re: Walking

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
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    What is the question that you want to ask?
    Correct my essay, please.
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 15-Jan-2017 at 11:53. Reason: Adding 'please'.

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    #4

    Re: Walking

    Quote Originally Posted by QuanLe View Post
    Do you like walking?
    Do you like to walk on your own or with others?
    Would you say that your city is a good place for walking?

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    I do like walking with others; I especially like to go for (long) walks with my girlfriend. My girlfriend She is 20 years old, and her name is Anna. Anna and I live in RRR , in RRR where there are many streets that are great for walking, streets, and where the landscape is beautiful and the atmosphere air is clean. On walking streets there are On our walks, we often see many kids are flying kites or playing with their parents. So RRR is a good place for walking.
    About us, We usually go for a walk in the every day morning, and while walking, we often talk about each other all sorts of things to learn from about each other.
    Note that I altered your first sentence to avoid the potential implication that you like going for a walk as a group (with others and your girlfriend).

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    Re: Walking

    Quote Originally Posted by QuanLe View Post
    Correct my essay, please.
    When are you going to submit your essay to your English teacher?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #6

    Re: Walking

    I do not know, how I do it?

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    Do you have an English teacher? Are you taking English classes? Why did you write this essay?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #8

    Re: Walking

    Hi emsr2d2,
    I learn English by myself.

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    Re: Walking

    Quote Originally Posted by QuanLe View Post
    Hi emsr2d2,
    I am learning English by myself.
    OK. I suggest that you make that clear if you post in this section, otherwise people might think you're asking for help with your homework. Perhaps you could start each post with "I'm learning English by myself and I have written the following essay for practice. Please check it for errors."
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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