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    #1

    As the quarrel between Peter and his girlfriend

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

    As the quarrel between Peter and his girlfriend progressed, they threw each other's belongings onto the street.

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    #2

    Re: As the quarrel between Peter and his girlfriend

    I'd use "intensified" rather than "progressed". I'd use "into" rather than "onto".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: As the quarrel between Peter and his girlfriend

    It seems that Peter and his girlfriend are headed for a breakup.

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