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    Please review my motivation letter

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    Last edited by ITGuy; 20-Jan-2017 at 09:23.

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    #2

    Re: Please review my motivation letter

    Will you be working in the nuclear power industry?

    What is the name of the position you are applying for? It's at a for-profit company, isn't it?

    I think "young people" is more natural than "young humans".

    The motivation letter is your chance to talk about yourself. So do exactly that. Talk about yourself!

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    #3

    Re: Please review my motivation letter

    Please space between paragraphs. However, don't change the original.

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    #4

    Re: Please review my motivation letter

    The Chernobyl disaster occurred on April 26, 1986.

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    #5

    Re: Please review my motivation letter

    We use the word "its" this way:

    I cannot remember its name.
    The dog are its food from its food dish.
    The cat sits on its mat.
    Every thing is in its place.
    A cat licks its fur.
    A dog knows its owner.
    Last edited by Tarheel; 20-Jan-2017 at 08:30.

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    Re: Please review my motivation letter

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    #7

    Re: Please review my motivation letter

    ITGuy, it is clearly stated at the top of this page that you must not delete posts from this section. Tarheel took the time to write four responses, all of which are now pointless because you have deleted the contents of post #1. I am recommending that you be put into moderation.

    Thread closed.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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