Please review my motivation letter

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Will you be working in the nuclear power industry?

What is the name of the position you are applying for? It's at a for-profit company, isn't it?

I think "young people" is more natural than "young humans".

The motivation letter is your chance to talk about yourself. So do exactly that. Talk about yourself!
 

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Please space between paragraphs. However, don't change the original.
 

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The Chernobyl disaster occurred on April 26, 1986.
 

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We use the word "its" this way:

I cannot remember its name.
The dog are its food from its food dish.
The cat sits on its mat.
Every thing is in its place.
A cat licks its fur.
A dog knows its owner.
 
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ITGuy, it is clearly stated at the top of this page that you must not delete posts from this section. Tarheel took the time to write four responses, all of which are now pointless because you have deleted the contents of post #1. I am recommending that you be put into moderation.

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