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    #1

    Grammar correction

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    Last edited by Zee10; 19-Jan-2017 at 21:24. Reason: Removed unnecessary bold.

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    Re: Grammar correction

    Quote Originally Posted by Zee10 View Post
    Please correct me wherever I made any mistakes I have made as I want to send this email to my colleagues.

    Also, please add good vocabulary if possible. (What do you mean by "good vocabulary"?)

    I am pleased to share with you that management has promoted me to Sales Executive.
    I am delighted to announce that I have been promoted to Sales Executive.

    First of all, I would like to say thanks to Mr. Jeff who has trusted me and given me this opportunity.

    I am also grateful to Mr. Herman for his cooperation and guidance, and for teaching me business ethics which he has taught me in over the last 2.5 two-and-a-half years. Mr. Herman, thank you so much for the motivation and support which allowed me to taking take up this challenge.

    I am optimistic that I would will learn several new things a lot with the/my new team, and I am also confident to that I will achieve my annual goal objective. I will give do my best for to ensure that the team’s targets to be are accomplished.

    In the end, Finally, I expect I look forward to everyone’s your cooperation and support. and We will all work as a team and play a vital role in the growth of the company.
    See my suggested changes above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: Grammar correction

    zee10, why have you deleted the contents of post #1?

    As this is the second, or third, post in which you have done this, I am closing the threads. Do not do this again.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 19-Jan-2017 at 21:33.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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