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    When Peter's grandmother died

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

    When Peter's grandmother died and left him the money, he seized the opportunity to buy his first home.

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    Re: When Peter's grandmother died

    I'd use "some money" or "all of her money", rather than "the money". Otherwise, it's OK.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: When Peter's grandmother died

    "The money" can work if you already mentioned/discussed a certain sum of money in your text.

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