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    #1

    I woke to a man's face above me

    I am wondering if my sentences sound natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    I woke to a man's face above me. The man had thick eyebrows and dark piercing eyes. He shoved a gun into my face and told me to be silent.

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    Re: I woke to a man's face above me

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I am wondering if my sentences sound natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    I awoke to find/see a man's face above me. The man He had thick eyebrows and dark piercing eyes. He shoved a gun into my face and told me to be silent.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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