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    #1

    Gina played with her husband like a cat

    I am not sure if my sentence sounds natural. Would you please help me and correct my mistakes?

    Gina played with her husband like a cat with a mouse, and then she pounced, demanding a divorce.

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    Re: Gina played with her husband like a cat

    I'd make it two sentences and remove ​and.
    I am not a teacher.

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