The Australian Computer Society and The British Computer Society

[english_learn]

I am an IT professional whose qualifications and skills have been certified by both the Australian Computer Society and the British Computer Society. I am well organized, energetic, dedicated and expert in successfully managing large complex multi-billion-dollar flagship projects in both private and public sectors in Asia, Australia and the Middle East

(Edit by mod: This isn't the original post #1, which was deleted by the OP. This is a copy of post #7 so that there is at least something contained in post #1.)

[emsr2d2]

It's not a complete sentence. In addition, the word order at the start is confusing. Do you mean "The IT professional who has been certified by both the Australian Computer Society and the British Computer Society ..."?

[GoesStation]

Can you write a simple sentence that leaves out all the details but says generally what you want to say here? Replace Australian Computer Society and The British Computer Society certified IT professional with the single word "person" and leave out the place names. Once you've constructed that sentence, you can put the details back.

[emsr2d2]

Note that I have changed your thread title. Titles should include some/all of the words/phrases you are querying. Generic titles such as "Grammar check" are useless - make every title individual and relevant to its specific thread.

[english_learn]

Dear Teacher,

I have updated, there are two sentences now,but i would like to make them as one.

It's not a complete sentence. In addition, the word order at the start is confusing. Do you mean "The IT professional who has been certified by both the Australian Computer Society and the British Computer Society ..."?

[emsr2d2]

Please don't go back and edit post #1 after it has received responses. It now makes the responses look like nonsense! If you're asked to revise something, please post the new version in a new response.

I have looked at your new version. The first thing you need to do is check the difference between "who's" and "whose".

[english_learn]

Thanks , please see below

I am an IT professional whose qualifications and skills have been certified by both the Australian Computer Society and the British Computer Society. I am well organized, energetic, dedicated and expert in successfully managing large complex multi-billion-dollar flagship projects in both private and public sectors in Asia, Australia and the Middle East

Please don't go back and edit post #1 after it has received responses. It now makes the responses look like nonsense! If you're asked to revise something, please post the new version in a new response.

I have looked at your new version. The first thing you need to do is check the difference between "who's" and "whose".

[teechar]

"... the private and the public, etc."
"... the Middle East."

[english_learn]

"... the private and the public, etc."
"... the Middle East."

Thanks , how can make both sentences into one ?

[teechar]

Thanks. How can I merge both sentences into one?

Which two sentences do you mean?

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