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    When Putera the...

    Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone could help me to check my writing below. Thank you.

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    When Putera the Indonesian man wishes to marry Pevita the gorgeous Malaysian, he has to jump over hurdles as his grandfather blames Pevita's mother as a notorious secret agent who kidnaps wealthy bankers.


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    When Putera, an Indonesian man who works for a Penang hotel meets Pevita, a beautiful Malaysian woman, he is instantly in love. The lovebirds decide to get married, but their parents reject. Ray, Putera's grandafather, and Fariza, Pevita's mother are in a feud, as Ray blames Pevita as a notorious secret agent who has been kidnapping world's famous wealthy bankers. Will the two ever have a blessed marriage as they wish?

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    #2

    Re: When Putera the...

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone could help me to check my writing below. Thank you.

    Short summary
    When Putera, the an Indonesian man, wishes to marry Pevita, the a gorgeous Malaysian woman, he has to jump over hurdles as because his grandfather blames believes that Pevita's mother as is a notorious secret agent who kidnaps wealthy bankers.


    Long summary
    When Putera, an Indonesian man who works for a Penang hotel meets Pevita, a beautiful Malaysian woman, he is instantly in love. The lovebirds decide to get married, but their parents reject. Ray, Putera's grandafather, and Fariza, Pevita's mother are in a feud, as Ray blames Pevita as a notorious secret agent who has been kidnapping world's famous wealthy bankers. Will the two ever have a blessed marriage as they wish?
    See above. "... blames Pevita as a notorious ..." is incorrect in both summaries.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #3

    Re: When Putera the...

    What is it a summary of?

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    Re: When Putera the...

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    See above. "... blames Pevita as a notorious ..." is incorrect in both summaries.
    Thanks for the correction teacher and also noted on the incorrect line.I will look in to it.

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    #5

    Re: When Putera the...

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    What is it a summary of?

    It' a movie summary teacher.

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    #6

    Re: When Putera the...

    You usually say "blame someone for something", not "blame someone as somethiing.
    I am not a teacher.

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