Nikitus
Senior Member
- Joined
- Oct 4, 2013
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- Chile
- Current Location
- Chile
Hello.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
An old video appeared in the screen of the auditorium. The camera maked a close up to a young and beautiful blonde girl.
The audience began to talk, while Kelly realized that she was the star of the video. Suddenly appeared a young boy, Ben, on screen, speaking to Kelly.
When the video ended, a large part of the audience stares at Kelly.
She acts like if nothing happened. The leadership course continued. She decided to stay on the leadership course and think in over a solution.
Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
An old video appeared in the screen of the auditorium. The camera maked a close up to a young and beautiful blonde girl.
The audience began to talk, while Kelly realized that she was the star of the video. Suddenly appeared a young boy, Ben, on screen, speaking to Kelly.
When the video ended, a large part of the audience stares at Kelly.
She acts like if nothing happened. The leadership course continued. She decided to stay on the leadership course and think in over a solution.