RubikGvng
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Hi guys, I am applying to the MSc in Healthcare Management at Copenaghen Business School, this is my motivational essay, could please someone review it? I'll be very grateful :
Dear Sirs,
This is my application for the MSc in Business Administration and Innovation in Health Care at the Copenaghen Business School.
One may wonder why you should take me instead of another student applying for this master program. I am not going to say that you should take me because I am the best student you could ever admit or for other boastful reasons. That would only be a-debatable issue.
My purpose is simple, and yet meaningful for me. As you know, I decided to apply for this course at your university, the Copenhagen Business School, a university that is far away from home and in a country where is spoken a language with which I am not familiar, whereas I could study in my native home, Italy, where everything would be significantly easier. I decided to run a risk, someone may say a great risk, but I believe firmly that a life without risks is a life without success. I took this decision consciously as I know that studying at CBS would give me major possibilities rather than studying in my home country and as I am aware of the fact that I will not disappoint you, therefore I am ready to take this chance.
I would like to enroll in this master at your University because this is the great combination of my two major passions, the healthcare and the business administration.
My passion for the Health Care sector became evident when I was five years old and I started visiting my aunt’s clinical analythical laboratory, I loved that place because it was such small but such useful for the citizens of the small town where I grew up. I was impressed by the ability to directly effect on people’s life of a small laboratory.
I have been helping my aunt for years in her laboratory, my main duty was to check the invoices due to my good mathematical attitude. Growing up, I have been following my father, a real estate developer, in his job and this made me love the business administration, for this reason at my last year of high school I decided to enroll in a bachelor of Business Administration and Management at Bocconi University dreaming to continue my studies in the Healthcare Management sector.
In addition, I can contribute to the international program with my background in student’s organizations, since I went to the highschool I started spend my time in various student’s organizations which had the objective of improve student’s life, locally and nationally. I held many leadership positions, I have been the provincial president of the biggest student’s organizations of the province then I have been elected President of all the province’s students. Thanks to this position, I could sit in a round-table with the Regional Councillor of Education to write a new Law for the right to study in Sicily. Then I partecipate to the National Council of Presidents in Rome, a meeting with the Italian Minister of Education. I kept working in organizations at Bocconi University, founding ACT Bocconi, an electoral list which has ranked second at the 2015 elections.
These experiences, combined with my internship at the Consulate General of Italy in Philadelphia, have stimulated my ability to plan, to visualize solutions creatively, and to implement them successfully with the talent in dealing with people.
I strongly believe that I will benefit a lot from studying at the Copenhagen Business School as it is a very prestigious and well known institution with pragmatic and effective teaching. Furthermore, the city of Copenhagen is a remarkable stimulating environment and it supplies plenty of business and cultural opportunities.
Fully aware of the numerous applications you have received for this master, I am most grateful for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Luca xxxxx
Dear Sirs,
This is my application for the MSc in Business Administration and Innovation in Health Care at the Copenaghen Business School.
One may wonder why you should take me instead of another student applying for this master program. I am not going to say that you should take me because I am the best student you could ever admit or for other boastful reasons. That would only be a-debatable issue.
My purpose is simple, and yet meaningful for me. As you know, I decided to apply for this course at your university, the Copenhagen Business School, a university that is far away from home and in a country where is spoken a language with which I am not familiar, whereas I could study in my native home, Italy, where everything would be significantly easier. I decided to run a risk, someone may say a great risk, but I believe firmly that a life without risks is a life without success. I took this decision consciously as I know that studying at CBS would give me major possibilities rather than studying in my home country and as I am aware of the fact that I will not disappoint you, therefore I am ready to take this chance.
I would like to enroll in this master at your University because this is the great combination of my two major passions, the healthcare and the business administration.
My passion for the Health Care sector became evident when I was five years old and I started visiting my aunt’s clinical analythical laboratory, I loved that place because it was such small but such useful for the citizens of the small town where I grew up. I was impressed by the ability to directly effect on people’s life of a small laboratory.
I have been helping my aunt for years in her laboratory, my main duty was to check the invoices due to my good mathematical attitude. Growing up, I have been following my father, a real estate developer, in his job and this made me love the business administration, for this reason at my last year of high school I decided to enroll in a bachelor of Business Administration and Management at Bocconi University dreaming to continue my studies in the Healthcare Management sector.
In addition, I can contribute to the international program with my background in student’s organizations, since I went to the highschool I started spend my time in various student’s organizations which had the objective of improve student’s life, locally and nationally. I held many leadership positions, I have been the provincial president of the biggest student’s organizations of the province then I have been elected President of all the province’s students. Thanks to this position, I could sit in a round-table with the Regional Councillor of Education to write a new Law for the right to study in Sicily. Then I partecipate to the National Council of Presidents in Rome, a meeting with the Italian Minister of Education. I kept working in organizations at Bocconi University, founding ACT Bocconi, an electoral list which has ranked second at the 2015 elections.
These experiences, combined with my internship at the Consulate General of Italy in Philadelphia, have stimulated my ability to plan, to visualize solutions creatively, and to implement them successfully with the talent in dealing with people.
I strongly believe that I will benefit a lot from studying at the Copenhagen Business School as it is a very prestigious and well known institution with pragmatic and effective teaching. Furthermore, the city of Copenhagen is a remarkable stimulating environment and it supplies plenty of business and cultural opportunities.
Fully aware of the numerous applications you have received for this master, I am most grateful for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Luca xxxxx
