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    Tia and her two friends..

    Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone could check my writing below. Thank you.

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    Tia and her two friends embark on a journey to an isolated village to know more about a dance form that is facing extinction. They discover that the dance might have supernatural connections.

    Long Summary
    Tia and her two friends embark on a journey to an isolated village to know more about a dance form that is facing extinction. The three anthropologists would do anything to learn more about the dance until one day they discover that the dance might have supernatural connections.

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    Re: Tia and her two friends..

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, I would really appreciate it if someone could check my writing below. Thank you.

    Short Summary
    Tia and her two friends embark on a journey to an isolated village to know find out more about a dance form that is facing extinction. They discover that the dance might have supernatural connections.

    Long Summary
    Tia and her two friends embark on a journey to an isolated village to know learn more about a dance form that is facing extinction. The three anthropologists would do anything to learn more about the dance until one day they discover that the dance might have supernatural connections.
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