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    A group of long-time..

    Hi, can someone please check this sentence, thanks in advance.

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    A group of long-time buddies avoid returning to their village every Chinese New Year. This prompts their parents to pack their bags and visit their sons and daughters in the city.

    Long Summary
    A group of long-time buddies who have been successful with their careers avoid returning to their village every year during Chinese New Year. Upset and disappointed, this prompts the group`s parents to pack their bags and visit their sons and daughters in the city in hopes of celebrating the auspicious day together.

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    Re: A group of long-time..

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaya87 View Post
    Hi, can someone please check this the following sentences? Thanks in advance.

    Short summary
    A group of long-time buddies avoid returning to their village every Chinese New Year. This prompts their parents to pack their bags and visit their sons and daughters them in the city.

    Long Summary
    A group of long-time buddies who have been successful with in their careers avoid returning to their village every year during Chinese New Year. Upset and disappointed, this prompts the group`s their parents to pack their bags and decide to travel to the city to find out what visit their sons and daughters are up to and to in the city in hopes of celebrate ing the auspicious day together with them.
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