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    Talking Some people never really settle down

    REVISE TO CORRECT UNCESSARY SHIFTS:
    Some people never really settle down to a profession.In fact.such people have found jobs only when they needed shelter or food.

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    Re: Some people never really settle down

    Quote Originally Posted by Khallouki View Post
    Revise to remove unnecessary shifts, please:

    Some people never really settle down to a profession. (Space required here) In fact, such people have found jobs only when they needed shelter or food.
    Welcome to the forum.

    I have changed your thread title. Titles should be unique and individual to the thread and include some/all of the words/phrases you are querying.

    I have made some punctuation corrections above. What do you mean by "remove unnecessary shifts"?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Question Re: Some people never really settle down

    I mean by shift:findinding something wrong in sentences concerning tenses or something else.

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    Re: Some people never really settle down

    It would be better if you said "Please tell me if there are any mistakes in my sentences".

    Some people never settle into one profession. Some even get a job only when they need money for food or shelter.


    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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