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    Please help me proofread the following cover letter. Thanks a lot.

    In the summer of 2014, I was selected to Shanghai Jiao Tong University (SJTU) for a two-month doing academic research. I had gained much technical knowledge of analog by discussion with Lab classmates there. They selflessly shared their analog-designing experiences which were valuable. In March of 2017, I am going to be screened to UCLA for an academic research collaboration program. I am confident that I have the ability to embrace the challenges and eventually win out the other analog IC designers.

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    Re: win out

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    I was selected to Shanghai Jiao Tong University (SJTU)
    What does that mean? Who were you nominated by?

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    I am going to be screened to UCLA
    What does that mean?

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    I am confident that I have the ability to embrace the challenges and eventually win out the other analog IC designers.
    What challenges are you referring to? What do you mean by "win out the other analog IC designers?"

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    Re: win out

    1. After a selection process, I was sent to Shanghai Jiao Tong University.
    2. I am recommended by my adviser to be sent to UCLA.
    3. The mission to UCLA is to do scientific and technological exchange between my school NCTU and UCLA. There will be a hyper-competitive for each member to conduct experiments on analog IC design. Although the task is challenging, I have the courage to rise to the challenge, and I believe I can knock spots off other competitors.

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    Re: win out

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    Please help me proofread the following cover letter. Thanks a lot.

    In the summer of 2014, I was selected to go to Shanghai Jiao Tong University (SJTU) for two months to conduct doing academic research. I had gained much technical knowledge of analog IC design by from discussions with lab classmates there. They selflessly shared their analog-design ing experiences which were valuable. In March of 2017, I am going to be screened nominated to go to UCLA for an academic research collaboration program. I am confident that I have the ability to embrace the challenge and eventually win out triumph over the other analog IC designers in that program.
    If it has already been decided that you're going, say, "In March 2017, I will go to UCLA, etc."

    Quote Originally Posted by contiluo View Post
    1. After a selection process, I was sent to Shanghai Jiao Tong University.
    2. I am have been recommended by my adviser to be sent to UCLA.
    3. The mission to UCLA is to do part of a scientific and technological exchange between my school NCTU and UCLA. There will be a hyper-competitive for intense competition and each member to will conduct experiments on analog IC design. Although the task is challenging, I have the courage to rise to the challenge, and I believe I can knock spots off beat the other competitors.


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