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  1. Senior Member
    Student or Learner
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    #1

    He killed all the thieves

    Hi,


    Is "He killed all the thieves which was a cruel act" correct?

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    Retired English Teacher
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    #2

    Re: He killed all the thieves

    You need a comma after 'thieves'. I'd use 'savage' or 'brutal' rather than 'cruel'.

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