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    #1

    If you are desperate

    I feel that my sentence does not sound natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    If you desperate, you will become friends even the devil if he promises to help you.

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    Re: If you are desperate

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I feel that my sentence does not sound natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?

    If you are desperate, you will become friends even with the devil if he promises to help you.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: If you are desperate

    ... You will even become friends with the devil would be more natural.
    I am not a teacher.

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