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    Text for a website

    Hello!

    I was asked to translate a text for a website from my native language into English.

    Here it is its small fragment:
    We intive you to focus on a beautiful world of Svyatogorie: here you can find documental and fictional films about the Holy Mountains and God's Saints, who used to struggle here, story lines about the contemporary history of the monastery, news videos about feasts and special events held at Svyatogorsk Lavra, live streaming of church services, Svyatogorsk abbot Metropolitan Arseny's interviews and sermons, weekly multimedia orthodox calendar called "Sennight", chants of Svyatogorsk Lavra's brethren choir, as well as story lines about Svyatogorsk Lavra from different mass media etc.
    Have a pleasant and edifying watching!

    Please check this text for any grammar mistakes.
    All your remarks and comments are appreciated.

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    Re: Text for a website

    Quote Originally Posted by Ksenia View Post
    Hello!

    I was asked to translate a text for a website from my native language into English.

    Here is some of it: it is its small fragment:

    We intive invite you to focus on a the beautiful world of Svyatogorie. Here you can find documental documentary and fictitious fictional films about the Holy Mountains and God's saints who used to struggle here, story lines ["anecdotes"?] about the contemporary history of the monastery, news videos about feasts and special events held at Svyatogorsk Lavra, live streaming of church services, Svyatogorsk abbot Metropolitan abbot Arseny's interviews and sermons, our weekly multimedia orthodox events calendar called Sennight, chants of Svyatogorsk Lavra's brethren choir, as well as story lines media stories about Svyatogorsk Lavra. from different mass media etc.

    Have a pleasantWishing you happy and edifying viewing! watching!
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    Re: Text for a website

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
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    Thank you very much.
    I meant "plots" or "short stories" under "story lines".

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    Re: Text for a website

    Quote Originally Posted by Ksenia View Post
    Thank you very much.
    I meant "plots" or "short stories" under by "story lines".
    Use "short stories."

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