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    #1

    Bob started as a shop assistant

    I am wondering if my sentences sound natural.

    Bob started as a shop assistant and gradually made his way to the upper echelons of the company. Called "Uncle Bob" by his colleagues, he now travels around the world promoting a new image of the company.

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    #2

    Re: Bob started as a shop assistant

    I'd use "the company's new (corporate) image" instead of "a new image of the company" in that sentence.

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