Aamir Tariq
Senior Member
- Joined
- Mar 28, 2016
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Urdu
- Home Country
- Pakistan
- Current Location
- Pakistan
Today I went to a school located in Peshawar to get my son enrolled. They asked me to type an application. Kindly check if the application is grammatically correct and has correct punctuation.
Here is what I typed.
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To
The Principal
XYZ High School,
The Mall, Peshawar.
Dear Sir,
With due respect, it is stated that we want to enroll our son Ashaaz Aamir in Prep class at XYZ High School. Ashaaz is a talented kid with a passion to learn things quickly, he gained 3[SUP]rd[/SUP] position in the final exams of playgroup last year and we are hoping he will do even better on his final exams of nursery class this year. We want our kid to excel in education-friendly environment at your school. We were not aware of the dates of submission of enrollment forms due to lack of knowledge. We hope you will give our kid a chance to grow as a better individual by accepting him as a student at your school.
Sincerely yours
Parents of Ashaaz Aamir
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Regards,
Aamir the Global Citizen
Here is what I typed.
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To
The Principal
XYZ High School,
The Mall, Peshawar.
Dear Sir,
With due respect, it is stated that we want to enroll our son Ashaaz Aamir in Prep class at XYZ High School. Ashaaz is a talented kid with a passion to learn things quickly, he gained 3[SUP]rd[/SUP] position in the final exams of playgroup last year and we are hoping he will do even better on his final exams of nursery class this year. We want our kid to excel in education-friendly environment at your school. We were not aware of the dates of submission of enrollment forms due to lack of knowledge. We hope you will give our kid a chance to grow as a better individual by accepting him as a student at your school.
Sincerely yours
Parents of Ashaaz Aamir
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Regards,
Aamir the Global Citizen
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