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    When Diana was stopped for speeding

    I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.

    When Diana was stopped for speeding, she was deeply upset and thought she was having a stroke.

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    Re: When Diana was stopped for speeding

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    she was deeply upset and thought she was having a stroke.
    Did that happen because she got stopped for speeding or was she feeling that way beforehand?

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    Re: When Diana was stopped for speeding

    teechar,
    Now I understand my sentence is unclear.
    I should have written like this:

    When Diana was stopped for speeding, she became deeply upset and thought she was having a stroke.

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    Re: When Diana was stopped for speeding

    Quote Originally Posted by Bassim View Post
    I should have written it like this:
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