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    #1

    Kelly smiled after her truly intentions were revealed by her friend Kimberly

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "Kelly smiled after her truly intentions were revealed by her friend Kimberly. She approved the idea with a gesture with her head."

    Thanks.

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    #2

    Re: Kelly smiled after her truly intentions were revealed by her friend Kimberly

    "True intentions."

    "With a head gesture" is more natural.

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    #3

    Re: Kelly smiled after her truly intentions were revealed by her friend Kimberly

    Given that she's showing approval, I'd say "... with a nod [of her head]".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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