[Cover Letter] Cover letter Proofreading

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lamichii

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Hi everybody, could someone have a check on my cover letter please?
Thank you in advance.

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the Marketing Assistant position as advertised on the xxxx’s website.

I have extensive experience in business administration. In the last ten years I worked for different companies performing various tasks including accounting, human resource and administrative tasks. During my period of employment I gained a greater understanding of organizing and prioritizing multiple projects in a high stress work environment. These experiences have enabled me to use new technologies and improve work processes. I recently did a Marketing Program with an internship in New York, where I had the opportunity to work in an international company interacting with people from different countries.

I am a flexible, enthusiastic and social person. I believe that my professional experience and my personality qualify me as a candidate for this position. Please find enclosed a copy of my resume, which gives further details of my education and career to date.
 I thank you in advance for your consideration and I look forward to the opportunity of meeting with you to further discuss my qualifications and professional experience.

Yours faithfully,

xy
 

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Hi lamichii, and welcome to the forum. :)
Please correct the information on your profile page first.
 

lamichii

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Hi lamichii, and welcome to the forum. :)
Please correct the information on your profile page first.

Hello, thank you. I have done.
 

teechar

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Hi everybody, could someone [STRIKE]have a[/STRIKE] check [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] my cover letter please?
Thank you in advance.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the Marketing Assistant position as advertised on [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] xxxx’s website.

I have extensive experience in business administration, and [STRIKE]In[/STRIKE] over the last ten years, I've worked for different companies [STRIKE]performing[/STRIKE] in various [STRIKE]tasks[/STRIKE] roles including in accounting, human resources and office administration. [STRIKE]ve tasks.[/STRIKE] During this time, [STRIKE]my period of employment[/STRIKE] I gained a greater understanding of organizing and prioritizing multiple projects in a high-pressure [STRIKE]stress[/STRIKE] work environment. These experiences have enabled me to use new technologies and improve work processes. I recently completed [STRIKE]did[/STRIKE] a marketing program [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] as part of an internship in New York, where I had the opportunity to work in an international company, interacting with people from different countries.

I am a flexible, enthusiastic and social person. I believe that my professional experience and my personality qualify me as a candidate for this position. Please find enclosed a copy of my resume, which gives further details of my education and career to date.
 I thank you in advance for your consideration and I look forward to the opportunity of meeting with you to further discuss my qualifications and professional experience.

Yours faithfully,

xy
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