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    Persuasive essay

    Should U.S. assist developing countries with immunization. Support your views with examples.

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    Re: Persuasive essay

    Quote Originally Posted by THOUGHTFUL View Post
    Should the U.S. assist developing countries with immunizations? Support your views with examples.
    Can you tell us where you found that essay prompt please?

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    Re: Persuasive essay

    Also, please tell us what you are going to do with your essay once it's finished.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Can you tell us where you found that essay prompt please?
    https://www.kibin.com/essay-writing-...p-get-started/
    I found it here.

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    Also, please tell us what you are going to do with your essay once it's finished.
    I will do my best to enhance my writing skills by analyze my essays with the help of this essay.

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    Quote Originally Posted by THOUGHTFUL View Post
    You did not quote the prompt correctly, and that made it seem as if it was poorly coined. It is very important that you quote text exactly as you find it. You omitted "the" from "the US" and "efforts" from the end of that prompt. That may not seem important to you, but it is!

    Okay, now you need to to brainstorm and come up with ideas for this essay. Remember to focus on the given question to ensure that you stay on topic and not stray outside the scope of the essay. Think of points supporting the idea and points against it. Give yourself a maximum of 20 minutes to do that. Then write those (in point form) and post them here. Don't worry too much about grammar, and try to keep the points as concise as possible.

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    I will be careful about those unexpected errors.

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    Supporting Points :
    1. Globelization spreading diseases all over the world.Their eradication is necessary.
    2. Developed countries like The U.S. have better plan and sources to deal with diseases.
    3. Diseases are curse for humanity, we should resolve it by unitedly.

    Opposing Ideas:
    1. Diseases are indirectly controlling the population.
    2. It will burden the U.S. economy and their people.
    3. Developing countries have to take serious and basic steps. Any help is only a westage of money without these steps.

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    Quote Originally Posted by THOUGHTFUL View Post
    Supporting Points :
    1. Globelization spreading diseases all over the world.Their eradication is necessary. [That's off topic.]
    2. Developed countries like The U.S. have better plan and sources to deal with diseases. [I'm not sure how this relates to that essay. I suspect this is also off topic.]
    3. Diseases are curse for humanity, we should resolve it by unitedly. [Why?]

    Opposing Ideas:
    1. Diseases are indirectly controlling the population. [What?! That's off topic and potentially highly controversial!]
    2. It will burden the U.S. economy and their people. [Usable point]
    3. Developing countries have to take serious and basic steps. Any help is only a waste of money without these steps. [Usable point]
    You only have two usable (against) points. Try again. Think hard!

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    Supporting points:
    1.To support all countries as a team to fight against any epidemic.
    2.To analyze the effect of new discovered medications on different people belonged to developed as well as developing countries.
    3. Donating to the developing countries is better option than throw the surplus medication before expire.
    Opposing ideas:
    1.

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