
English Teacher
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I知 writing to apply for working as an intern at your charitable foundation. I知 presently a student of Senior 3, and I can speak English fluently. Besides, I知 an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations. Charity is a noble cause, and I always have a strong passion for it. I believe that being an intern at your foundation will be a wonderful practice for me. I値l be willing to send you any further information if you consider my request.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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The above is self recommendation writing practice for my students. It presumes that you are a student of Senior 3, and you池e writing a letter of recommendation to a charitable foundation that is recruiting an intern who is in charge of translation and writing. The above is my own version. It serves as a possible version for my students after checking their work. I hope someone would check it and help perfect it. Many thanks in advance.
Teechar, you are right. This is just an ordinary job application letter. In China, when we say "self recommendation letter", it means you just want to advertise yourself to a company or an organization that you love to work for. But here it's just a job you're applying for. So, it's not the same situation.
By the way, why do you think this letter will drive HR(Human Resoures)crazy? I just do not get it.
Teechar didn't say the letter would send HR crazy. Saying "This is HR gone berserk" indicates that such a letter is evidence that the situation in HR generally is currently crazy.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.
Last edited by rodgers white; 20-Feb-2017 at 01:44.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I知 writing to apply for working as an intern at your charitable foundation. I知 a grade 3 student at Hong Xing Senior high School and interested in English. Besides, I am equal to the job with the following reasons: Firstly, I have a command of English grammar. Meanwhile, I can work patiently and carefully. What痴 more, my school think highly of this opportunity and will introduce the foundation around.
I will appreciate it if I could be chosen.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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The above was written by one of my students. And the following was the version after I proofread my student's work. Please check the following and help me further improve it. The word limit is between 60 and 90. Many thanks in advance.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I知 writing to apply for workingas an intern at your charitable foundation. I知 a Grade 3 student at Hongxing Senior High School and interested in English. Besides, I amequal toqualified for the jobwithbecause of the following reasons: Firstly, I have a command of English grammar. Meanwhile, I can work patiently and carefully. What痴 more, my school thinks highly of this opportunity andwill introduce the foundation aroundencourage us to apply.
I will appreciate it if Icould be chosencan receive your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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Last edited by rodgers white; 20-Feb-2017 at 01:48.
I think my student just wants to say: What's more, my school think highly of this charitable foundation and encourage us to apply for this job..What’s more, my school think highly of this opportunity and will introduce the foundation around. [I have no idea what the highlighted sentence is supposed to mean.]
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