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    #11

    Re: Please check my letter and help polish it. Many thanks in advance.

    Quote Originally Posted by rodgers white View Post
    I think my student just wants to say: What's more, my school thinks highly of this your charitable foundation and encourages us to apply for this job.
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    #12

    Re: Please check my letter and help polish it. Many thanks in advance.

    Quote Originally Posted by teechar View Post
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    I would like to advise my student to write in this way: Most importantly, I've always had a passion for charity. I'm sure being an intern at your foundation would be a wonderful and unforgettable experience for me. What do you think?

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    #13

    Re: Please check my letter and help polish it. Many thanks in advance.

    Quote Originally Posted by rodgers white View Post
    I would like to advise suggest to my student to write in this way: Most importantly, I've always had a passion for charity. I'm sure being an intern at your foundation would be a wonderful and unforgettable experience for me. What do you think?
    That's also possible.

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