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Hi, can someone please check this the following sentences? Thanks in advance.

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A man who vowed not to marry again after the death of his wife, soon fall back in love with a woman who behaviour looks like his late wife. Will he ever manage to join hand with her?

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A high-spirited country girl Rose has been offered to work at a corporate company. Unluckily for her, she has to work under the cold-hearted Azam who thinks of himself as "Mr. Perfect". As the two spend more and more time together, Azam begins to warm up to Rose, as she reminds him of his late wife Lisa. However, he is in a dilemma as he has made a promise to his wife that he would never fall in love and marry another woman beside her.
 

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Hi, can someone please check this the following sentences? Thanks in advance.

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A man who vowed not to remarry [STRIKE]again[/STRIKE] after the death of his wife, soon falls [STRIKE]back[/STRIKE] [I presume he wasn't in love with this woman in the past. Otherwise, use "falls in love again".] in love with a woman whose personality is similar [STRIKE]behaviour looks like[/STRIKE] to his late wife's. Will he ever manage to [STRIKE]join hand with[/STRIKE] get married to her?

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A high-spirited country girl Rose has been offered [STRIKE]to work[/STRIKE] a job at a corporate company. Unluckily for her, she has to work under the cold-hearted Azam who thinks of himself as "Mr. Perfect". As the two spend more and more time together, Azam begins to warm up to Rose, as she reminds him of his late wife Lisa. However, he is in a dilemma as he [STRIKE]has[/STRIKE] had made a promise to his late wife that he would never fall in love and marry another woman. [STRIKE]beside her.[/STRIKE]
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[I presume he wasn't in love with this woman in the past. Otherwise, use "falls in love again".]


Yes, he's not. I can understand the sentence more clearly now after omit the word 'back'. Thank you teechar.
 

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[I presume he wasn't in love with this woman in the past. Otherwise, use "falls in love again".]


[STRIKE]Yes, he's[/STRIKE] No, he was not. I can understand the sentence more clearly now after omitting the word 'back'. Thank you teechar.
You're welcome.
 
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