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  1. Narkises's Avatar
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    #1

    A delayed Proposal email

    Hello,

    What is your opinion about this email I've written. Thank you.


    subj: A delayed Proposal

    Hi,

    Although being on time is a mean in research collaboration, my perfectionism doesn't let me stop reading some more related articles. I've read about 30 of them and still a few remain. I will send you a perfect proposal as soon as I master over all the related articles.

    Kindest Regard,
    Please correct my mistakes if you encounter any.

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    Re: A delayed Proposal email

    Quote Originally Posted by Narkises View Post
    Hello,

    What is your opinion about this email I've written? Thank you.


    Subj:The Delayed Proposal

    Hi,
    Dear Dr Doolittle,

    Although being on time is a mean punctuality is important in research collaboration, my perfectionism doesn't let allow me to stop reading some more related articles. I've read about 30 of them and still a few remain. I will send you a perfect proposal as soon as I master cover all the related articles.

    Kindest regard,
    .
    Last edited by teechar; 21-Feb-2017 at 20:21.

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    Re: A delayed Proposal email

    I think the verb after "let" should be simple!!
    Anyway, who is Doolittle?
    Please correct my mistakes if you encounter any.

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    Re: A delayed Proposal email

    And I really want to tell her "Hi".
    Please correct my mistakes if you encounter any.

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    #5

    Re: A delayed Proposal email

    Quote Originally Posted by Narkises View Post
    I think the verb after "let" should be a bare infinitive. simple!
    I meant to write "allow"; it's fixed now.

    Quote Originally Posted by Narkises View Post
    Anyway, who is Doolittle?
    It's just an example.

    Quote Originally Posted by Narkises View Post
    And I really want to tell her "Hi".
    Have you done that before? Are you already on first-name basis with that person?

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