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    Hope you are

    Hope you are doing great!!

    Let me introduce myself. I am Anil Jain worked under you in the year 2007.

    I know it's a long time but would like to join Reliance once again. Is there any possibility for me to join Reliance?

    Looking forward to hear from you. Many thanks for your time.

    Is the above language correct to send an email? Is there any better way to communicate the above?

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    Re: Hope you are

    I am Anil Jain. I worked under you in the year 2007.

    I know it's a long time but I would like to join Reliance once again. Is there any possibility of me joining Reliance again?

    I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time.

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    #3

    Re: Hope you are

    I think 'the year' can be omitted.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Hope you are

    I would amend it as follows:

    Dear [name]

    My name is Anil Jain and I worked for you in 2007. I am currently exploring new employment options and I would like to know if there is any possibility of my rejoining Reliance.

    I look forward to hearing from you with details of any current opportunities.

    Thank you for your consideration.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: Hope you are

    Quote Originally Posted by Anil Giria View Post
    Is the above language correct to send in an email? Is there any better way to communicate the above say it ?
    No teacher had corrected the above, so I tried.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Hope you are

    Is the above language correct to send in an email? Is there any better way to communicate the above say it ?


    Why "language" and "any" are not correct?

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    Re: Hope you are

    I think there is no need to specify what you wrote is a language.
    See the difference between 'a' and 'any' at https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...=1#post1164526
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Hope you are

    Quote Originally Posted by Anil Giria View Post
    Is the above language correct to send in an email? Is there any better way to communicate the above say it ?


    Why are "language" and "any" are not correct?
    Matthew didn't say they are not correct.

    You asked 'Is there any better way to communicate the above?' and Matthew gave you one.

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