realize2010
Member
- Joined
- May 26, 2012
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Korean
- Home Country
- South Korea
- Current Location
- Australia
Hi
This is part of my resume which I am unsure of.
Would you be able to correct my resume, if there is any sentence that you might find it tough to understand or that has grammar-related issue ?
It would be very appreciated if you give me some suggestions on my resume.
Responsibilities
® Re-issued incorrect invoices; issued credit note and refund <- ( I am not sure about the use of ';' )
® Assisted with budgeting of all XX(company name) properties, adjusting CPI and marketing rate for new F/Y 2016-2017 and reconciling them ( is it comprehensible ? )
® Reconciling various financial reports including GST and sundry data as needed
® Assisted with the Year End audit process, particularly classifying recoverable outgoings and reconciling them by store (Is it comprehensible and grammatically correct ?)
® Ran supermarket chain - ordered, received and replenished stock and handled cash register while simultaneously marketing products by successfully achieving expected yearly profit margin ( is it comprehensible and the format(structure) is fine to use on resume? )
Acheivements
1) Used strong attention to detail to find and clear some items that had been sitting on suspense accounts for a few years, which were caused by wrong adjustment of journal entries ( is it comprehensible ?)
2) Achieved target profit margin; recognized for multitasking and communication skills with customers
Thanks you sooooooooo much in advance and have a nice weekend
This is part of my resume which I am unsure of.
Would you be able to correct my resume, if there is any sentence that you might find it tough to understand or that has grammar-related issue ?
It would be very appreciated if you give me some suggestions on my resume.
Responsibilities
® Re-issued incorrect invoices; issued credit note and refund <- ( I am not sure about the use of ';' )
® Assisted with budgeting of all XX(company name) properties, adjusting CPI and marketing rate for new F/Y 2016-2017 and reconciling them ( is it comprehensible ? )
® Reconciling various financial reports including GST and sundry data as needed
® Assisted with the Year End audit process, particularly classifying recoverable outgoings and reconciling them by store (Is it comprehensible and grammatically correct ?)
® Ran supermarket chain - ordered, received and replenished stock and handled cash register while simultaneously marketing products by successfully achieving expected yearly profit margin ( is it comprehensible and the format(structure) is fine to use on resume? )
Acheivements
1) Used strong attention to detail to find and clear some items that had been sitting on suspense accounts for a few years, which were caused by wrong adjustment of journal entries ( is it comprehensible ?)
2) Achieved target profit margin; recognized for multitasking and communication skills with customers
Thanks you sooooooooo much in advance and have a nice weekend