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    Hello! I'm studying English and I've started writing essays so it would be of great help if someone could check this essay. Thank you so much


    TECHNOLOGY IN OUR LIVES
    Nowadays the technology dominates big part of our lives and it has brought about controversial opinions.
    From my point of view, technology has both advantages and disadvantages like everything in our life. What do you think about technology in our lives?
    On one hand it is thought that we are getting lazier because more tasks have become automated. For example: today there are a lot of gadgets that help us to do the housework more easily like dishwashers, microwaves, coffee maker, washing machine. This means that there are fewer tasks to do and more time to do nothing. Shopping, learning, working and entertainment can all be accessed from the comfort of our own homes. As a result, we are spending more time in doors than we are outside. We also get addicted to various gadgets such as computers, mobile phones, lifts that if these gadgets break down or there is not electricity we cannot work at all and we feel lost.
    On the other hand the main advantage of computing probably is that it gives access to the information quickly and easily. Incidents that have happened anywhere in the world reach us through internet and we can even communicate with people from all parts of the word. Also, new discoveries have saved many innocent lives. Without brain scanners, fetal monitors, endoscopes, lasers, radioactive chemicals and computers, a lot of people would struggle with their health.
    In conclusion, everything that we use in life is good or bad depending in their use. If we balance the use of technology we will get more benefits than problems.

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    Re: Technology in our lives

    Nowadays the technology dominates big part of plays a major role in our lives and it has brought about controversial this has received mixed opinions.
    I am not a teacher or a native speaker.

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    Re: Technology in our lives

    Quote Originally Posted by Marisol208 View Post
    Hello! I'm studying English and I've started writing essays, so it would be of great help if someone could check this essay. Thank you so much.
    Hello Marisol208, and welcome to the forum.

    Quote Originally Posted by Marisol208 View Post
    TECHNOLOGY IN OUR LIVES

    Nowadays the technology dominates a big part of our lives and it that has brought about controversial opinions on the matter.
    From my point of view, technology has both advantages and disadvantages like everything in our life. What do you think about technology in our lives? [Avoid asking questions about opinions in your essays.]
    On the one hand, it is thought that we are getting lazier because more tasks have become automated. For example, today there are a lot of gadgets that help us to do the housework more easily like dishwashers, microwaves, coffee makers and washing machines. This means that there are fewer tasks to do and more time to do nothing. Shopping, learning, work ing and entertainment can all be accessed from the comfort of our own homes. As a result, we are spending more time indoors than we are outside. We have also become get addicted to various gadgets such as computers, mobile phones and lifts, such that if these gadgets break down or there is not electricity, we cannot work function normally at all and we feel lost.

    On the other hand, technology has obvious advantages. the main advantage of computing probably is that it gives Thanks to advanced technology, nearly everyone has quick, easy and often free access to the information and communication tools. quickly and easily. Incidents that have happen ed anywhere in the world reach us through the Internet, and we can even communicate with people from all parts of the word online. Also, new technological discoveries have saved many innocent millions of lives. Without brain scanners, fetal monitors, endoscopes, lasers, radioactive chemicals and computers, a lot of people would struggle with their health.

    In conclusion, everything that we use in life is technology can be good or bad, depending on how we use it. in their use. If we balance the use of technology wisely, we will get more benefits than problems.
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    Re: Technology in our lives

    Thank you so much !!!!

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    Re: Technology in our lives

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    Thank you so much!
    You're very welcome.
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