Gaya87
Member
- Joined
- Jul 5, 2015
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Tamil
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- Malaysia
Are the following sentences grammatically correct? And also please give your feedback on the sentence structure. Are they neat and well-organized? Thanks in advance.
Short summary
A final-year student, Star, has failed her English exam and may not obtain her degree. In order to graduate, she is forced to retake the test by attending midnight classes which is said to be haunted.
Long summary
A final-year student, Star who might not graduate in time because she failed her English exam. In effort to convince the dean to let her graduate, he permits her to retake the test by going to midnight classes which is said to be haunted. Naturally, she’s afraid, so she gathers a band of misfits who eventually becomes her best friends. Will Star and her friends can handle this special class without terrorizing trauma?
Short summary
A final-year student, Star, has failed her English exam and may not obtain her degree. In order to graduate, she is forced to retake the test by attending midnight classes which is said to be haunted.
Long summary
A final-year student, Star who might not graduate in time because she failed her English exam. In effort to convince the dean to let her graduate, he permits her to retake the test by going to midnight classes which is said to be haunted. Naturally, she’s afraid, so she gathers a band of misfits who eventually becomes her best friends. Will Star and her friends can handle this special class without terrorizing trauma?