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    #1

    After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark

    Hello.

    Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

    "After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark, 42 years old, thin, tall, and brown eyes, sitting in a table, facing the window, waiting for her."


    Thanks.

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    Re: After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark

    Quote Originally Posted by Nikitus View Post
    After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Markó 42 years old, thin, tall, and brown eyes, sitting in at a table, facing the window, waiting for her."

    Thanks.
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    Re: After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark

    We don't say "entered to". It should be "After she entered the coffee shop" at the start.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    We don't say "entered to".
    Indeed we don't. I missed that one.

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