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    Three lines letter to a bank

    Could anyone corect the few lines below? I would be grateful

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    I’m writing in response to your letter about my bank account. I have not been working or living in Norway since 2014. I wish to close my bank account. On (date)………I paid a sum of …………..
    Provided that my letter relating to closing my bank account has not been delivered, I repeat my request to close it and stop accruing interests( I mean a sum of money banks charge from savings)

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    Re: Three lines letter to a bank

    Quote Originally Posted by indifferent View Post
    Could anyone correct the few lines below? I would be grateful.

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    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I’m writing in response to your letter dated 2 January 2017, about my bank account No. 12345. I have not been working or living in Norway since 2014, and so I wish to close my bank account. On (date)………I paid a sum of …………..

    Provided Assuming that my previous letter, dated 20 December 2016, relating to closing my bank requesting the closure of this account has not been delivered to you, I repeat my request to close it this account and stop accruing charging fees on it.

    I await your prompt response.

    interests( I mean a sum of money banks charge from savings)
    I don't understand the part highlighted in blue.

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    Re: Three lines letter to a bank

    Note that your title should have been "Three-line letter to a bank". However, given that titles should include some or all of the words you are querying, a better title would have been something like "I'm writing in response to your letter".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Three lines letter to a bank

    On (date)………I paid a sum of …………..

    I'd like to write that I paid the charged fee, and, when i did that.
    Last edited by indifferent; 03-Mar-2017 at 22:26.

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    Re: Three lines letter to a bank

    The part you wrote in blue gives the information you want. Remember to capitalise "I" every time you write/type it.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Three lines letter to a bank

    Quote Originally Posted by indifferent View Post
    On (date)I paid a sum of ..

    On 21 December 2016, I paid in full the fees and charges on the account ($123.00).

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