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    compassionate leave letter

    Please correct my letter.

    Sir,
    My father has been reported with heart blockage at xxx hospital. Doctor's were advised him to undertake heart surgery on Xxx. As an elder Son my family need my support on the surgery date. So if u sanctioned two days leave on xxxx date it would be grateful.
    Last edited by teechar; 04-Mar-2017 at 17:02.

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    Re: compassionate leave letter

    Quote Originally Posted by poongodi View Post
    Please correct my letter.

    Dear Sir,
    My father has been reported admitted into ABC Hospital with heart blockage. at xxx hospital. The doctors were have advised him to have undertake heart surgery on Xxx [What does that mean?]. As an elder S the oldest son in my family, I am needed and must be present at the hospital my support on the day of the surgery. date. So if u sanctioned I, therefore, ask you to grant me two days' leave on 23 and 24 March. xxxx date it I would be most grateful.
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    Last edited by teechar; 04-Mar-2017 at 17:03.

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    Re: compassionate leave letter

    Xxx stands for date
    Last edited by teechar; 04-Mar-2017 at 17:03.

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    Re: compassionate leave letter

    Leave it out.
    Last edited by teechar; 04-Mar-2017 at 17:04.

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    Re: compassionate leave letter

    Note that I have also changed the title of your thread. "Plz" is not a word in English.

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