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    any grammar errors

    Can you check to see if there are grammar errors?

    At work I am easily overstressed when there are numerous deadlines to meet. I view my high blood pressure condition as a barrier at work as I cannot deal with too much stress daily. It is hard to multi-task too. I take more time to complete tasks compared to my colleagues. To overcome stress, I decide to give myself more time to complete the tasks.

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    Re: any grammar errors

    Quote Originally Posted by robin lee View Post
    I view my high blood pressure condition as a barrier at work as I cannot deal with too much stress daily.
    What do you mean by that?

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    Re: any grammar errors

    With high blood pressure I tend to get anxious when I face stress so in a way it slows me down. In that way I said it was a barrier. Maybe I should not say that - should say it slows me down.

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    Re: any grammar errors

    I view my high blood pressure condition as a barrier at work as I cannot deal with too much stress daily.
    I suffer from high blood pressure, which impairs my ability to cope with stress.

    I guess you can say your condition is a handicap.


    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: any grammar errors

    Quote Originally Posted by robin lee View Post
    At work, I am easily overstressed when there are numerous deadlines to meet. I view my high blood pressure condition as a barrier hindrance at work as I cannot deal with too much stress in a day. daily. It is hard to multi-task too. I take more time to complete tasks, compared to my colleagues. To overcome stress, I decide try to give myself more time to complete the tasks.
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